Postcard Views
what do you think of this poem? and no i didnt write it, can i have your views and thoughts please!?
POSTCARDS FROM GOD (1)
Yes, I do feel like a visitor,
a tourist in this world
that I once made.
I rarely talk,
except to ask the way,
distrusting my interpreters,
tired out by the babble
of what they do not say.
I walk around through battered streets,
distinctly lost,
looking for landmarks
from another, promised past.
Here, in this strange place,
in a disjointed time,
I am nothing but a space
that sometimes has to fill.
Images invade me.
Picture postcards overlap my empty face
demanding to be stamped and sent.
‘Dear . . . ’
Who am I speaking to?
I think I may have misplaced the address,
but still, I feel the need
to write to you;
not so much or your sake
as for mine,
to raise these barricades
against my fear:
Postcards from god.
Proof that I was here.
© Imtiaz Dharker
and for those of you who dont get it, its God who is writing it and hes writing a postcard to people on earth!
It's good but I'd prefer it if it had a consistent flow or maybe rhymed more often that it does. From what I can see, there are only four rhyming couplets:
-way & say
-place, space & face (triplet)
-to & you
-fear & here
If it had more of a rhythm, it'd be great. Otherwise, its quite bland.
Hope I've helped
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