Locks Sault
How should I format this sentence or sentences?
I'm writing my introductory paragraph on Michigan and I'm not sure how to properly punctuate this
From Detroit basketball to Dune climbing in Traverse City. From the water locks in Sault Ste. Marie to the Mighty Mackinaw Bridge.
Should that remain two separate sentences like it is or should it have a comma were the period is?
Chris -
Even together, these don't make a sentence. You don't have a subject or a verb. What you have are a series of prepositional phrases; no person, place or thing is doing anything. From Detroit basketball to dune climbing in Traverse City, from the water locks in Sault Ste. Marie to the Mighty Mackinaw Bridge, what is happening?
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